Heaven and hell remains on both sides of Time… An ocean.
Which side is heaven? Here or on the other side?
Of this unchartered ocean of epoch, a riddle!
If humans were created by god, I have a question
For him to answer me truthfully!
“Why did you give this island of clay,
In the sea of poignant tears, to us in the Beginning?
If we were made by the Devil, let me ask him
Only once, a very pertinent information!
“What made you to come to heaven and offer us
A fruit, and tempt us to eat it; to throw us away.
Into this macabre ocean, of woes and grief?”
We know, both of you will keep mute,
Because you never thought, humans
Are that adept, to adapt to this Mother Nature;
And question the purity of your intentions.
Instead you were making us guinea pigs,
For your amusement, and enjoyment.
And still your mirth continues, with a sinister look.
We toil, starve, weep, grope, curse and perish!
You have also become helpless like us, now…
Let us both look at each other and amuse! Close
Such a lovely poem Kunjubi! Great writing!
Latha
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You are inebriated with LOVE in every tissues of your body...Bless you.. Such a great feeling is a rare godsend in life....keep it always fresh. and effervescent with intense emotion.. cheers..... kunjubi
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Thank you Raj jee... I am expecting an answer from either, or for that matter from any one. else. cheers.. kunjubi
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a brave and out of ordinary look at life, creation and God...
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beautifully written one kunjubi
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Komal, i am wondering how it is possible for you to keep a track of my poems. .You are too good at enjoying it.. My hearty salutation for the enjoyment... cheers.. kunjubi
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Yash u are always first to read me.. Thank you dear... cheers.... kunjubi
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kunjubi.... introspecting exloring lines...............a lot of querries go on and this is one of them............loved to read this
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Beautiful!!A poem with diference!!!
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