Game of the heart…

Apr 28 2008  | Views 114 |  Comments  (6)
Playing a game in the squash court, With rebounding emotions of the heart As the soft ball,... Expand

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  kunjubi posted 2 mnths ago

Thank you my dear friend. ..I am happy u enjoyed reading it. plese continue reading all of these.  cheers. kunjubi



  kahbikahbi22 posted 2 mnths ago

Every man is an ocean, ever on the lookout in debris
For lost treasures and possessions withered from his heart....
words spoken so true, I enjoyed this very much.
kahbikahbi22



  kunjubi posted 3 mnths ago

I always ask myself while reading a comment on the poem published, if I actually deserve such a word of appreciation, dear Lata. You all are enduing worthless qualities to the lines i write, and endorsing it.. This is  a mixed feeling. Honestly I told u, I started to write poems in last June only. and in the begining it was malayalam poems only. Then simultaneously added English along with it.. But many of u cannot read malayalam, so very recently i have started to sort of  translate thesemalayalam ones to English   also. But there is one handicap there. The culture, scenario,and other aspects conjoining the canvas of the themes, will not coincide with the vocabulary, in my quiver always.. I have never thought of publishing a book containing these worthless ramblings, so far...but if u can be the Publisher., I will def consider it. ( chumma)...Thank u for the comment. I am elated. and greatly obliged.. cheers. kunjubi.



  Dreams unveiled posted 3 mnths ago

Kunjubi,

Yet another feather to your hat! What a wonderful poem. The words have been picked with dexterity and coined to make these wonderful stanzas! Every work of yours deserves credit. Why dont you publish books? Have you done it before?

Latha



  kunjubi posted 3 mnths ago

Thank you my dear friend!. So nice to say in brief ,the reason for  no comments from readers. Hope u appreciated it. Just imagine we being Indians,  do we show formal  etiquettes in our daily lives.? We don't.... It is a culture,we have learned through ages, to keep silent and be philosophical. I believe I have the fortitude to take it  in a light vein. Really I dont bother so much about that aspect. This is just a feeling of nausea in the heart ,to spit out what is  becoming stagnant there. And u call it poems and appreciate sometimes. Nothing serious!.  Thank you again for the  kindwords.. I am honoured.  cheers. kunjubi



  Legion posted 3 mnths ago

Some times you wonder when you have written with so much grace and panache, why no comments from others. My dear friend, the silence from other gives you the simplest message on your writing - Beautiful





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